Wednesday, April 15, 2009

critique from 4-15-09

caleb:
intro:
pacing of 'of'
go over mary's interview with heather
possible to use animation for sections?
question mark after 'HERE'

james:
titles: fade out everything at once...

andrew:
combine opera, italian studies, and writing
gather more b roll (ex. kids walking in street)

david:
culture shots - shot of students walking looks the same... the dome shot is shaky when it tilts up.

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